Mahtab Narsimhan: “Writers are always fascinated by ideas.”

Mahtab Narsimhan

Mahtab Narsimhan is an award-winning author with numerous critically acclaimed books, nominated for several awards, including “The Third Eye” which won the Silver Birch Fiction Award.

She is inspired by the desire to make sense of the world through stories and is deeply committed to representing diversity in her books. Please visit www.mahtabnarsimhan.com for more information.

Her definition on bringing perfection in writing is not different, however, common points which we commonly do not concentrate upon. She believes to practice writing every day. It is a process of continuous learning and for that matter, you have to keep your tools sharp and focus on the techniques of learning on your chosen genre. To help yourself is to read your favorite writers and write and rewrite.

Every author or writer's first draft is messy, you just have to come back to your draft again with freshly open eyes. Therefore, see your script new and get another better ideas about your book, plot and many other things. Moreover, don't try to make yourself fool by making you your critic. Mahtab well explained that why you should need a group of critic to get you an honest feedback on your authorship.

LU: What makes one a better writer

MN: Practise writing every day and honing your craft by always learning better techniques of writing. Furthermore, reading books on writing as well as taking relevant courses within your genre. Therefore, reading other writers and reading extensively. By this, I mean reading within and outside of your genre. Every book teaches you something: either how to write well, or how not to write. Polishing your work to the best of your ability, having a trusted critique group who will review your work and provide honest feedback. For this, I suggest that you do not approach family members or close friends. Their opinion might be biased based on the closeness of your relationship.

What you need is someone who will give you honest feedback to help make your manuscript stronger. Above all, keep an open mind towards improving your craft and taking constructive feedback in a positive manner. If you only want praise and not criticism, you may never get to the next level.

LU: What is your secret of writing

MN: I honestly do not have a secret to writing. I’ve always been an avid reader since childhood. I devoured books and was always thirsting for more. My favourite genre was (and still is) fantasy and science fiction. Enid Blyton, C.S. Lewis, Roald Dahl and Kenneth Grahame were some of my favourite authors. 

I started writing late in life and without any prior knowledge of how stories worked. All I started with was a desire to include India’s rich culture and mythology in a fantasy story. 

My first book, THE THIRD EYE was four years in the making. It was rejected by over a hundred publishers and only one in all those said yes to publication. It went on to win a prestigious award in Ontario. 

Since then, I have published 14 books and contributed to many anthologies and articles. A common theme in the writing of these books is hard work, constant revising, and getting the first draft down as soon as possible, while you are inspired by a shiny new idea.

  • Hard work: I write early in the morning and try and put in at least 2 hours/about 1500 words on a new draft. I also have a day job which takes up most of the day. In the evenings I tend to take care of the business side of writing, answer emails, plan/research other stories or critique my friends’ work. 
  • Constant Revising: Writing is mostly rewriting. My first draft is usually a big mess. That is fine. It’s usually for my eyes only. I try and get the initial idea down on paper as soon as I can (while the passion for that idea is still strong — the longer you wait, the harder it is to complete the story). I put the draft away for about a month while I work on something else. Then I come back with fresh eyes and start revising. Usually, after about 2-3 revisions, I’m ready to share it with a critique partner. Then comes some more revising before I send the manuscript to my agent. 
  • Get the idea down asap: Writers are always fascinated by ideas. New ones are especially fun because research, creating a new world, characters, plot threads etc. is very exciting. Then comes the hard part of actually writing. This is where many wanna-be writers fail. It takes discipline to put this all down on paper, and you have to stick with it day after day. Or like so many millions, you will always want to write a book, but will never write one.

LU: What is your best timing of Shining (writing, developing your ideas)?

MN: I’m most productive early in the morning. I work from about 5.30 am to 7.30am. I also like to know that the “hardest” part of my day is behind me, and then I can focus on the other activities. On the days that I do not write, I get anxious and irritable. Writing every day is a habit which took years to form. I’m happy that it serves me very well now and provides the discipline I need to keep creating.

LU: What is your Message to aspiring writers along with your Opinion and why?

MN: Writing is hard. If there is anything else you’d rather do, do it. But if writing brings you joy, then that is what you must do. Read a lot. You cannot be equipped to write unless you have the ideas and vocabulary (the tools) to write. Even then, you have to practice writing as often as possible (ideally every day) to become a good writer.

LU: What is your favourite quote?

“Everything you want is on the other side of fear.”

George Addair

LU: Why You have chosen only children niche, and what keeps you inspiring?

MN: At heart, I’m still a 12-year-old. I love writing for this age group because this is when children are becoming aware of the world, learning to be independent, and making friends. This age group is curious and excited to learn new things. I’ve found that you can deal with any topic (death, illness, abuse, loss, bullying among others), no matter how difficult, as long as age-appropriate terminology is used.

I love that writing for children forces me to write a tight plot with no meandering because kids, unlike adults, have short attention spans. If you do not hook them with your first line and pace the story well, you’ll lose them. Last, I love that stories for children have a hopeful (not always happy) ending. I’m not an advocate of lived-happily-ever-after stories. Kids need to know that the world is not always a kind place and bad things can happen. But that, with courage, ordinary people can rise to extraordinary challenges. I hope that my characters can inspire my readers to look within for strength and rise to the challenges life may throw at them.

Poet Subhadra Kumari Chauhan Was The first Indian Satyagrahi

Subhadra Kumari Chauhan (b. 16 Aug 1904– d.15 Feb 1948) A typical Indian housewife and a matured woman at sixteen bearing five children.
Subhadra Kumari Chauhan (b. 16 Aug 1904– d.15 Feb 1948) A typical Indian housewife and a matured woman at sixteen bearing five children. | i'mBiking Subhadra Kumari Chauhan 1976 stamp of India.jpg

Subhadra Kumari Chauhan (b. 16 Aug 1904– d.15 Feb 1948) A typical Indian housewife and a matured woman at sixteen parenting five children. We can imagine that how experienced she was that time. It is true that maturity comes by experience. Thus, one who travelled through several emotional phases of life. The treasured memories often make us fall in love with writing. And, hence it was Subhadra Chauhan. Despite her being mother, she took parts in Satyagrah and reasoned the first Indian female became Satyagrahi. Being a protester at the age of 20 she got arrested in Nagpur, jailed twice in the British Government.

However, her career in politics, her evolving interest of writing caught the attentions of many country lovers when she wrote a poem on Jhansi Ki Rani (queen of Jhansi during the British Empire). The poem upon reading brings emotional fearless potential in any Indian. Therefore, it pumps up the readers with the feelings of patriotism. Thus, she became the most celebrated poet in the Indian literature.

Poem “Jhansi Ki Rani” by Subhadra Chauhan (English version)

The dynasties that shook the throne had raised eyebrows,
There was a new youth again in old India too.
Everyone knew the price of lost freedom,
Everyone had decided to run Firangi away.

The sun-shone in fifty-seven, that sword was old,
We heard the story from the mouth of Bundel bard,
Fought gallantly, she was the Queen of Jhansi.

Kanpur's maternal grandfather's sister-in-law was adorable,
The name Lakshmibai, that child was the only one of the father,
She used to study with Nana, she played with Nana,
And was the only friend of Spear, Shield, Kirpan, Dagger.

He remembered the tales of Veer Shivaji.
We heard the story from the mouth of Bundel bard,
Fought gallantly, she was the Queen of Jhansi.
Was it Lakshmi or was it Durga,
she herself was the incarnation of bravery,
Seeing the Marathas would be blown away
by the blows of her swords,
Plenty of hunting and playing fake battle-array,
Military encirclement, breaking the fort,
these were her favorite games.

Maharashtra-Kul-Devi, Bhavani was also her adorable,
We heard the story from the mouth of Bundel bards,
Fought gallantly, she was the Queen of Jhansi.

The engagement with the glory of bravery took place in Jhansi,
Rani Married, Became Rani Laxmibai and came to Jhansi,
Greetings rang in the palace, happiness prevailed in Jhansi,
She had come to Jhansi like the disgrace of Sughat Bundelas.

Chitra found Arjun, Shiva got Bhavani,
We heard the story from the mouth of Bundel bards,
Fought gallantly, she was the Queen of Jhansi.

Poem: Jhansi Ki Rani | खूब लड़ी मर्दानी वह तो झाँसी वाली रानी थी ( In Hindi Version)

सिंहासन हिल उठे राजवंशों ने भृकुटी तानी थी,
बूढ़े भारत में भी आई फिर से नयी जवानी थी, 
गुमी हुई आज़ादी की कीमत सबने पहचानी थी, 
दूर फिरंगी को करने की सबने मन में ठानी थी। 

चमक उठी सन सत्तावन में, वह तलवार पुरानी थी, 
बुंदेले हरबोलों के मुँह हमने सुनी कहानी थी, 
खूब लड़ी मर्दानी वह तो झाँसी वाली रानी थी॥ 

कानपूर के नाना की, मुँहबोली बहन छबीली थी, 
लक्ष्मीबाई नाम, पिता की वह संतान अकेली थी, 
नाना के सँग पढ़ती थी वह, नाना के सँग खेली थी, 
बरछी, ढाल, कृपाण, कटारी उसकी यही सहेली थी।

वीर शिवाजी की गाथायें उसको याद ज़बानी थी, 
बुंदेले हरबोलों के मुँह हमने सुनी कहानी थी, 
खूब लड़ी मर्दानी वह तो झाँसी वाली रानी थी॥
लक्ष्मी थी या दुर्गा थी वह स्वयं वीरता की अवतार, 
देख मराठे पुलकित होते उसकी तलवारों के वार, 
नकली युद्ध-व्यूह की रचना और खेलना खूब शिकार, 
सैन्य घेरना, दुर्ग तोड़ना ये थे उसके प्रिय खिलवाड़। 

महाराष्ट्र-कुल-देवी उसकी भी आराध्य भवानी थी, 
बुंदेले हरबोलों के मुँह हमने सुनी कहानी थी, 
खूब लड़ी मर्दानी वह तो झाँसी वाली रानी थी॥ 

हुई वीरता की वैभव के साथ सगाई झाँसी में, 
ब्याह हुआ रानी बन आई लक्ष्मीबाई झाँसी में, 
राजमहल में बजी बधाई खुशियाँ छाई झाँसी में, 
सुघट बुंदेलों की विरुदावलि-सी वह आयी थी झांसी में।

चित्रा ने अर्जुन को पाया, शिव को मिली भवानी थी, 
बुंदेले हरबोलों के मुँह हमने सुनी कहानी थी, 
खूब लड़ी मर्दानी वह तो झाँसी वाली रानी थी॥

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